黄老师 发表于 2012-12-11 15:33:11

开放英语4——写作

写作(6篇) 题目一:Instructions:建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。 A Meaningful Visit 1.参观的时间、地点 2.参观的内容 3.感想 注释 这是一篇记叙文。应该先陈述参观的时间和地点,因为是一次有意义的参观,因此,参观的地点应该有所选择,比如纪念馆、博物馆或者现代科技馆等,通过参观,了解历史达到以史鉴今,了解现代科技以感悟科技是第一生产力;然后叙述参观的全过程或者主要过程。因为这是记叙过去发生的事情,时态应该使用过去时。参考范文中,习语in salute意为“表示敬意”;not only…but also…意为“不但……而且……”;devote one’s life to意为“献身于……”,相当于devote oneself to。 范文 On March 5, 2006, under the leadership of our teacher, my classmates and I visited Lei Feng Memorial Hall. We stood before the statue of Lei Feng in silent salute for three minutes after getting off the bus. Then we arrived at the exhibition hall. The guide told us that Lei Feng was not only economical but also worked hard and devoted his whole life to serving the people. All of us were deeply impressed by his deeds and made up our mind to carry forward “Lei Feng Spirit”! (89 words) 题目二:Instructions:建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。 My First Day in the University 1.我在大学里的第一天时间 2.我在大学里第一天发生的事情 注释 这是一篇记叙文。根据提纲要求,应该先陈述在大学里第一天的具体时间,我国大学新生入学时间一般都在9月份,因此,大学第一天的时间应确定为9月份的某一天;然后叙述在大学的第一天里发生的事情的全过程或者主要过程,事情内容应该与学校相关,且是积极、向上的事情。因为这是记叙过去发生的事情,时态应该使用过去时。参考范文中短语arrive at意思是“到达”,可以用reach, get to等代替;crowds of的意思是“许多”,相当于many, a lot of, lots of, plenty of等。 范文 My university life started on September 1, 2006. When I arrived at the campus, there were already crowds of new faces waiting in a long line. With the help of two volunteers, I quickly completed the registration and was led to the dormitory. In the late afternoon, my new roommates and I held a small party and introduced each other in the bedroom. We made up our mind to study hard in the coming years. In the evening, the university had a welcome party for the freshmen and offered us a free movie. (93 words) 题目三Instructions:建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。 An Unhappy Event 1.事情发生的时间、地点 2.事情的经过注释 这是一篇记叙文。根据提纲要求,应该先陈述伤心事发生的时间和地点,然后叙述事情发生的全过程或者主要过程。因为这是记叙过去发生的事情,时态应该使用过去时。参考范文中,happen的意思是“发生”,可以用take place, occur等代替;短语set out表示“出发”,相当于set off, start off, depart等。stare at表示“凝视”,相关短语有gaze at, peer at等;have no choice but to do sth.表示“不得不做……”。 范文 This unhappy event happened on a Sunday. At nine o’clock in the morning, after getting the essentials in the supermarket, my friends and I set out for a picnic. One hour later, we arrived at Natural Picnic Zone. We chose an open field and took the food out of the car. When we set everything down and were about to have food, it began to rain and then poured down. We hurriedly got into the car without the food. Staring at the rain from the car window, we felt depressed and had no choice but to get back. (98 words) 题目四Instructions:建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。 My Last New Year 1.欢度新年的地点 2.欢度新年的过程 注释 这是一篇记叙文。根据提纲要求,应该先陈述在哪里欢度新年;然后叙述欢度新年的全过程或者主要过程,因为是新年,其内容应该尽可能的有特色,可以是与自然界相联系的,如滑雪、堆雪人等,也可以是人文关怀方面的,比如参加一些传统的活动,或者是现代的新时尚等。因为这是记叙过去发生的事情,时态应该使用过去时。参考范文中的“not…until…”的意思是“直到……才”。 范文 I spent my last new year in the countryside with my grandparents. Heavy snow began to fall soon after I arrived. I was very excited since it didn’t snow quite often in that area. I invited some friends to an open field. First, we took many beautiful pictures together on the snow; then we made a big snow man and fought with snow balls. Many people in the village also came out to enjoy the pretty scenery and some of them joined us. We did not go home until it was dark. (92 words) 题目五Instructions:建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。 A Rainy Day 1.下雨的时间 2.雨天发生的事情 3.感想 注释 这是一篇记叙文。根据提纲要求,应该先陈述这下雨天的时间,然后叙述事情发生的全过程或者主要过程。因为这是记叙过去发生的事情,时态应该使用过去时,有些地方也可以用过去完成时。表示在具体的某一天(如日期、生日、节日或星期几)或者某一天的上午、下午或晚上时,常用on, 如:on May 4th, 1919; on Monday, on Teachers’ Day, on my birthday, on that day, on the morning of July 2, on Sunday afternoon, on a cold winter evening等。 范文 It was on a rainy morning in March. When I woke up, it was nearly half past seven and my class began at 8 o’clock. I hurriedly got dressed and rushed outside. After waiting for ten minutes in the rain, I finally got on a crowded bus. The bus moved on slowly for several stops and suddenly it broke down. I had to run to school since the time was limited. When I arrived at school, I was soaking wet and the class had already begun. What a terrible rainy day! (91 words) 题目六Instructions:建议你在30分钟内,根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。 A Wonderful Time 1.一段美好的时光 2.具体描述 注释 该命题作文的文体为记叙文。根据提纲要求记叙一段美好的时光并进行细节描述,文章应开头点题,将笼统的一段美好时光具体化,如国庆节、同学聚会等,然后进行具体的描述。具体描述时可按事件本身的发展顺序进行。写作时态以一般过去时为主,叙事性文章也通常采用Last Saturday/The other day/Some weeks ago, I did sth.的方式开头;写作主体部分注意文章的连贯性,恰当运用连接词承上启下,如first, then, after that, in the end等;围绕作文主题的句子可以采用:I had a good/nice/happy time with sb., what a wonderful time it was,we enjoyed doing sth.等。 范文 It was indeed a wonderful time on National Day. I met one of my former classmates and we had a very happy time together. It had been a long period since we met last time, so we valued the meeting so much. First, we had a delicious dinner in a downtown restaurant. After that we had a very pleasant chatting. We talked about the time we spent in the college and the teachers we still remembered. We also exchanged news on life and work and agreed to keep in touch. What a wonderful time it was! (96 words)
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